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After Dark page 2

Here is the second layout test. Experimenting with layout and detail. Realizing how cropping and details can be much more effective than full view shots..

Here, again, is the original...

After Dark Full Page

I reworked some of the different panels and modified the text a bit....hope it looks better...

This really happened to us this summer while camping...if you ever hear screams in the woods at night it just might be a Red Fox or a Bobcat....but it does sound human....

Scream in the night!

Not so far away...

Yell in the woods!

All was still when I awoke to a human scream from far off in the woods.  I thought someone in the camp was playing around, a stupid joke.  But it did not stop.  It sounded like it was getting closer....